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First off, I'm only giving you an 8 because it's your pilot and also that way it makes you feel like you need to work harder on the next. But in all honesty I laughed my ass off through the whole episode. Loved the animation and the humor. Maybe work on character development in the next episode? I see you took a lot of time coming up with multiple characters so show us the relationships between each character. Anyways, that's my two cents. Really enjoyed it an look forward to the next episode.
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Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad to hear you found it funny.
I need to clarify that this is part of a series called "Just a Pilot"...
the first few episodes were called that because its just intended to be light-hearted.... not to be taken too seriously... as the series itself is a bit of a working progress... I hope thats cleared up the name a bit...
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